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Cameron Bebeau's avatar

Hello Mr. Ridley!

I've read your story, and I want to say that I know zero, zilch, nada about soccer.

However... this story has me interested in who Trevoh Chalobah is; it makes me curious as to whether he's touted as one of the top prospects in his age category, what his style of play is, and if there are any notable career achievements.

That's something I really like from the story! It made me interested in a sport I've not had the opportunity to follow along with. There were a few minor parts where the punctuation threw off my reading pattern, however this was a very solid piece, and I wanted to say that I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors!

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Nick Ridley's avatar

Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed the piece, if you're interested in learning more about football please consider subscribing!

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